A boy named Chirag wanted to become a cricketer, but nobody was with him who could help him even his parents. He lived in an Orphanage where his parents left him. He had a few friends who supported him.
One day a person came to the orphanage to distribute some old things among kids. And Chirag got a bat which that person had told it was Dhoni's bat. He also started believing it as a magical bat. Now he started playing with some friends and saw himself playing outstandingly.
One day when he was playing, a person (team selector) (Mr. Mohan) was passing from there and looked at him playing. That person got astonished, how a teenager could play so outstandingly! He noticed for a while and went near to Chirag and said, "would you like to play in our team?" He was amazed for a moment and said, " really! Of Course sir, it's grateful to me if I got a chance".
One day a person came to the orphanage to distribute some old things among kids. And Chirag got a bat which that person had told it was Dhoni's bat. He also started believing it as a magical bat. Now he started playing with some friends and saw himself playing outstandingly.
One day when he was playing, a person (team selector) (Mr. Mohan) was passing from there and looked at him playing. That person got astonished, how a teenager could play so outstandingly! He noticed for a while and went near to Chirag and said, "would you like to play in our team?" He was amazed for a moment and said, " really! Of Course sir, it's grateful to me if I got a chance".
Now Chirag started getting a lot of chances to play with new members. Very early, he got famous because of his batting. He scored enough runs in every match.
One day when he was to play a match then he noticed that his bat was not there. He was too upset and terrified because his heart (his bat ) was not with him. He loved it more than himself.
Suddenly a call came, it was from his mate Rohan, who was always jealous of him.
Rohan said," now how will you go to play? I have stolen your lucky bat. You can't score runs now."
Chirag requested Rohan," please give me the bat". But Rohan refused to give and said, " I broke your bat." Now Chirag was thinking how he would play. He didn't have that magical bat.
The same time Mohan( team selector) came and said, " go to batting". Chirag tried to explain his point but he didn't listen.
Chirag entered the stadium and tried to score some runs but he couldn't. He was depressed and came back to the dressing room.
One day when he was to play a match then he noticed that his bat was not there. He was too upset and terrified because his heart (his bat ) was not with him. He loved it more than himself.
Suddenly a call came, it was from his mate Rohan, who was always jealous of him.
Rohan said," now how will you go to play? I have stolen your lucky bat. You can't score runs now."
Chirag requested Rohan," please give me the bat". But Rohan refused to give and said, " I broke your bat." Now Chirag was thinking how he would play. He didn't have that magical bat.
The same time Mohan( team selector) came and said, " go to batting". Chirag tried to explain his point but he didn't listen.
Chirag entered the stadium and tried to score some runs but he couldn't. He was depressed and came back to the dressing room.
One of the team members Sohan came there and saw Chirag sitting there alone. Sohan asked, " what happened? Why are you depressed". Chirag told everything about the matter.
After listening it, Sohan said," no he didn't break your bat"
Chirag said, "yes he did, he told me by the call. How you can say that it is not broken"
After listening it, Sohan said," no he didn't break your bat"
Chirag said, "yes he did, he told me by the call. How you can say that it is not broken"
Sohan said first sorry and then started explaining. Actually I had stolen your bat because I thought I should have played with it. And replaced with another one. But a little later I realised it was not right, so I put it back. I didn't inform you about it.
" Your mate must have stolen another one. You were playing with your own bat, even though you hadn't scored because you were not confident while playing" Sohan said.
" Your mate must have stolen another one. You were playing with your own bat, even though you hadn't scored because you were not confident while playing" Sohan said.
He also advised," not bat, you have the potential. If you believe yourself, you can do anything"
Finally Chirag understood and applied it in his life. Now he started believing in himself for every moment.
Finally Chirag understood and applied it in his life. Now he started believing in himself for every moment.
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