This story began with an unemployed man(Ram) who was addicted to alcohol. Every Time, to complete his desires, he used to ask money from his wife(Priyanka), who would work under a small company. They used to have disputes all the time because of his husband's needs. She fed up due to her husband's behaviour. One day again, her husband asked for money for his drink, but this time she refused to give and said to go somewhere else.
Now after thinking, he decided to go to his friend's home who was also drunkard and used to give company to him. When he shared his problem in front of his friend(Shyam) thinking that he(friend) would help, his friend told him to listen, " today I can give you, but what after? You will have to arrange money so that you can be free for some days". After listening to this, he(Ram) said, "yes you are right, but what can I do?"
His friend suggested him to steal jewellery from his own house but without responding he(Ram) went from there. At night, someone came to his home to steal and Ram was not at home. He was about to steal, suddenly that woman got alerted and went to check who was there. For one moment, she thought he would be her husband and went to snatch the jewellery. While snatching, she only got an artificial moustache and his watch which that thief used to put on. The thief fled away from there somehow, she called police on the spot and told him about the matter.
Suddenly her husband(Ram) came home and saw everything. Every doubt was going to him because he used to ask for money and that day his wife denied.
Suddenly he saw that watch and got to know that his friend had the same watch. He told this to the police and the police investigated that and found his friend as a criminal.
His friend told them that he wanted to steal jewellery but he had not been getting the correct time but that day he decided to steal so that all the doubts would go to Ram. That day Ram decided that he would not drink now onwards and started living a happy life.
Exceptional piece of writing!!!
ReplyDeleteA well organized story with good dialogues. The flow and rising action to falling action is superb. Easy to relate and having a moral message at the end.
You are on a right direction Rohit:)
Thankyou ma'am.
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